Thursday, August 28, 2008

Falling in Love Again.

The dreaded years of sorrows have seemed to reach a close
The bruises are now healing, and so are the painful woes
The times of my life rejuvenate and revive
As the love strikes again letting me feel alive
The evanescing light in my heart seems to glow anew
Eclipsing all the grief that somehow made me blue
Wiping all the tears being shed in vain
I can feel the holy love happening again
And while my life had been as dormant as a sleeping volcano
With nothing to cherish and celebrate
A new spring of love splashes in my heart
Transforming the entire fate
Changing all around me, myself, my fears and pains
It seems like I am falling in love again!

26 comments:

Muhammad Dawood said...

Love never diminishes or fades
Like a straight line it runs
Once again the life plays a sonata of lovely tones
And the journey once againg begins

Could not say more to the beautiful work you produced!

Harold said...

Sarah this is a very good poem. Very powerful words.

SHERYAR NIZAR said...

really true. i must say .. very nicely thought and written..
keep it up

Raj Talreja said...

Simple the best Sarah !

Vinayak said...

nice poem!!!
excellently written!!!

Abhinav Viswambharan said...

Life indeed is beautifull, Sarah.

Beautiful poem. Good luck. :)

Prathyusha said...

Vicious circle eh? loved it..honest truth

.a. said...

I can feel the holy love happening again!

plain beautiful :)

It seems like I am falling in love again!

Lovely end.

i like the way you have rhymed the poem, 'As the love strikes again letting me feel alive' this is a little jarring though, nice nonetheless!

hope to read more of you!

Rahul Jain said...

I like your work.Very well done.

Nik said...

Nice work!

Of all, the choice of words was the best part, I think !!

Comfortably Numb said...

Wonderful. I think this was raw and crisp.

Cheers!!

Shiva said...

lovely poem
refreshing!
narrate this to the old love :)
Shiva
CrAzYbLoG ,
v.CoL

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Nice Blog

Kumpal said...

In love and war.. one never loses hope Sarah.. Keep trying, wish u all the best for ur second love if this poem is indeed true.


Good work, excellently written..

Hashan Hazarika said...

Beautiful poem Sarah !! Very romantic too !!

Cheeers !!

i write here
http://bakwasdairy.blogspot.com/

The Solitary Writer. said...

i loved the way u wrote

beautiful and heavy use of words

ProfessionalLab said...

Nice one!

Haseeb Ahmad said...

Enjoy ur life to the maximum...coz yesterday has gone an tommorrow may never come.....but life is beautiful....

its really amazing Sara....keep it up...nd now u know this URL of urs is in my Favourite list...so that it can b easily accessed....
God Bless u

The Beauty and the Beast said...

I am Asif... Just happened to stumble across your blog..
Awesome thoughts you have exhibited in your posts.. I really appreciate the meaning of your poems.. I am glad you found somebody again...

The Beauty and the Beast said...

Thank you for visiting my blog as well.. You asked me if I have an inspiration to write.. Yes! I do.. I guess, I need not tell more..

I do believe that our sources of inspiration are very similar.. What do you think is better? Moving ahead and living a life or stay put and reminisce the past?!

God bless you too..

The Beauty and the Beast said...

That was a very very diplomatic and bookish answer.. :)

Frankly, I think I have moved on.. but I am no longer the same person anymore.. I love the person I used to be..

I don't know how different it is for a girl.. but would really like to know about it..

The Beauty and the Beast said...

I don't know! I guess it's just an enevitable transition that occurs to get you acquainted to the fact that that person is gone forever! No matter what you do or what you say, you are just trying to console yourself.. If you are good at consoling then it might work for you.. but what if you are not?!

The Beauty and the Beast said...

Tell me about it!

The Beauty and the Beast said...

Oh I am not asking you about your past! Trust me, it cannot be put in words.. I was just approving of your statement..

Prajwala said...

I've only one word... Beautiful :)

Sarah Rahman said...

Thank you all for appreciating my work. It's the comments, critiques and compliments that trigger my thoughts and my inspiration to write more. Thank you for fueling my passion of writing :)