So vast and pure, and so obscure
Are the mazes of the divine
You think you know, and yet you don't
The boundless flow of life and its times
It's all in YOU, your heart and soul
Your mind and your percipience
Even then you stay a perfect stranger
To the reflection that is thine
You love, you live, you hold them dear
You see, you care, you think, you fear
You need them near, but it all disappears
And in the end you are only left with nothing
But an existence unclear
9 comments:
Life's not always fair. Sometimes you can get a splinter even sliding down a rainbow.but you provided us with such a exquisite ,i dont think that i have to slide down a rainbow to get an insight of life thru urs paramount of a vision.its marvellous.keep digging THE LIFE:-)
Though sad tone but beautiful read :)
Life is all what we make ourselves and once we content with Almighty & HIS blessings then we live a peaceful life. :)
nice! great imagery and emotion !!
hi sarah
no words to describe the feeling after reading ur composition.......so near to lyf...........though painful yet so true......nice one.....waiting for more:)
Interesting poem. A mixture of one's dilemma with faith, and the experience of the unrequited. A beautifully heartfelt piece. Well done.
Quite expressive and it beautifully showcases the perplexity and mortality of human existence.
Its lovely Sarah, its very difficult to understand the powers of Divine and still we know it all there within us..well done!!
Pushpee
Very well defined. The feelings in your mind. Life is beautiful live it more like a sunshine
Excellent piece clearly with a whole lot of experience put in for sure. Life is shaped only in accordance to how we shape it to be and the decisions we make.
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